Ok, here is another attempt at a topic, and all of the stuff that goes with it. At this point I just have to go for it. My paper is already well underway, and I am kind of at that point of no return...which means absolute havoc if I change it again...too late! Here is what I have got...

Watco using "Snow World" virtual Reality technolog in burn victim treatment centers on the quality of care the facility is able to give their patients?

Enthymeme: The implementation of Snow World virtual reality technology in burn victim rehabilitation centers will improve the quality of care provided by the facility by offering an additional form of pain control that is not only effective for many varieties of pain and disorders, but is a form of pain control that is free of negative side-effects.

Anything that allows the rehab facility to offer pain control that is effective for many types of pain and has no negative side-effects will improve the quality of care provided by the facility.

Audience-Head of rehab-facility administrator-regional director...those are the three people that I have to convince.

pros-
-none of the typical medication side-effects
-can be used by lots of therapists/many types of pain management
-less stress and perception of pain improves rate of healing.
-makes it easier for patients to continue with difficult therapy,
pain causes many to quit early=more future complications.
Cons
-$50,000 plus. Very expensive.
-Traditional forms of therapy already proven effective, more credible.
-Are types of burn victims that the machine does not work for-not for everyone.
very young, very old, and medically unstable.
-credibility of a video game...?